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I really like your attention to detail in this piece and its that extra time put into it that really gets a lot of people's attention. A lot of younger artists forget to do the same amount of work into the background as they do their main figures. A lot of editors look at that from my own experiences.
If I may say (and not to sound like I'm taking shots at your work), there are a few anatomical issues that kind of need addressing. The girl holding the tommy gun arm is a bit too long. It looks loop sided compared to the one going behind her back. The second girl's shoulder looks a little high on her figure and she looks really uncomfortable. Also the hand holding the revolver is really small.
Those are just some observations I saw. Otherwise, like I said I really dig your work and enjoy your deviations!